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FDI foreign direct investment (sentence check)

i think fdi play very vital role in our country because if fdi come in our country then government give thousand of employment and our country also develop like america,china.

Writing Feedback / Is it good for teenagers to work? Yes, it's a Good Idea [8]

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Writing Feedback / Is it good for teenagers to work? Yes, it's a Good Idea [8]

I think it is good for teenager becouse we found many time in society teenager they have not poket money to relaye.so part time job help him.and not only they earn money but also improved his knowlage skills.