Chilie
Jan 24, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS - making money would never replace a teddy bear for a child [6]
Many thanks for helpful corrections.
Many thanks for helpful corrections.
Chilie
Jan 23, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS - making money would never replace a teddy bear for a child [6]
G'day mates, help me please to estimate my work below
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Recently there have been a lot of arguments about engaging children in variable types of paid work. Some people are considered this is not allowable while others have profoundly converse conviction. This challenge is assumed to be quite controversial, hence it must be considered a lot more deeply.
Nowadays regular families foster their children under hard pressure of diverse bunch of conditions, which the real world dictates every day, inclining people to be a lot more like a business person. People have to be aware financially, they have to do much financial work during routine everyday's life as paying bills, buying various stuff, paying for service. This tendency leads to parents trying to bring up their child to be familiar with financial routine and to have ability to make and evaluate money. In other words they teach their children to work for repayment from childhood.
On the one side this behavior could lead to wealthy and financial consistency in adulthood, on the other side it could deprive the most important and joyful time of the life that significantly determines social behavior in the future life.
To my personal opinion, making money would never replace a teddy bear for child, who at that time so far believes in fairy-tales and imagine kingdoms, dragons and knights, princesses and mysterious creatures. However parents should not forget about current tendencies, furthermore they should try to give their child necessary financial skills during childhood, after all when a child express an interest and desire to earn money by his own, this time would be like an kick-off to allow and help him to start and experience repayment work.
G'day mates, help me please to estimate my work below
In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Recently there have been a lot of arguments about engaging children in variable types of paid work. Some people are considered this is not allowable while others have profoundly converse conviction. This challenge is assumed to be quite controversial, hence it must be considered a lot more deeply.
Nowadays regular families foster their children under hard pressure of diverse bunch of conditions, which the real world dictates every day, inclining people to be a lot more like a business person. People have to be aware financially, they have to do much financial work during routine everyday's life as paying bills, buying various stuff, paying for service. This tendency leads to parents trying to bring up their child to be familiar with financial routine and to have ability to make and evaluate money. In other words they teach their children to work for repayment from childhood.
On the one side this behavior could lead to wealthy and financial consistency in adulthood, on the other side it could deprive the most important and joyful time of the life that significantly determines social behavior in the future life.
To my personal opinion, making money would never replace a teddy bear for child, who at that time so far believes in fairy-tales and imagine kingdoms, dragons and knights, princesses and mysterious creatures. However parents should not forget about current tendencies, furthermore they should try to give their child necessary financial skills during childhood, after all when a child express an interest and desire to earn money by his own, this time would be like an kick-off to allow and help him to start and experience repayment work.
