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Grammar, Usage /
Sample of combining sentences; Need advice. [14]
Need help to combine two sentences!(please help me to combine 2 these sentences. I'm having a hard time to combine this.)
The woman was called the bridegroom's "sister." The bridegroom was called her "brother".
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" Web of Risks" by Brad Stone ; SUMMARY OF ARTICLE [4]
In the article " Web of Risks" by Brad Stone, the author discusses how people use social-network to share information. Social-networking sites are very popular for people to use to make friends, connect to each other, spend time and share their personal information such as Facebook and Myspace. According to the article, the author pointed at people who used social-network to share bad stuff which is not supposed to be posted on the web. For example,'' Drunken parties, recollection of sexual escapades,...". People who posted bad stuff they don't know that they could get in trouble. A 19-year-old student who was mentioned in the article got caught in a photo of him with a bottle of vodka in his hand.
( I DONT KNOW HOW TO WRITE THE CONCLUSION FOR THIS ARTICLE ) PLEASE HELP
IF YOU HAVE A BETTER SUMMARY FOR THIS ARTICLE PLEASE SHOW ME
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