Jazxro
Jan 30, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS- Effects of replacing sports and games with more acdemic sessions in schools [6]
this is pretty good
this is pretty good
Jazxro
Jan 30, 2013
Essays / BRISBANE; 200 word short personfication story [4]
Brisbane is the Capital of Queensland in Australia
Sydney is the Capital of New South Wales in Australia
Melbourne is the Capital of Victoria in Australia
I personificate that Brisbane is a little boy always wanting to be bigger and better then the big capitals like Sydney and Melbourne.
Brisbane is the Capital of Queensland in Australia
Sydney is the Capital of New South Wales in Australia
Melbourne is the Capital of Victoria in Australia
I personificate that Brisbane is a little boy always wanting to be bigger and better then the big capitals like Sydney and Melbourne.
Jazxro
Jan 30, 2013
Essays / BRISBANE; 200 word short personfication story [4]
actually you have to personificate brsibane, like making him into a real life person, and i personificated the climate as weather, sometimes giving him too much water causing floods, if the weather doesnt give him water, then he drys out.
" personificate brsibane" into a short story with as much (simile,metaphor and personification)
actually you have to personificate brsibane, like making him into a real life person, and i personificated the climate as weather, sometimes giving him too much water causing floods, if the weather doesnt give him water, then he drys out.
" personificate brsibane" into a short story with as much (simile,metaphor and personification)
Jazxro
Jan 30, 2013
Essays / BRISBANE; 200 word short personfication story [4]
Guys plz help me, i need to create a 200 word short personification story on brisbane. (use as much as simile, personification,metaphor)
this is what i have already (really bad)
Brisbane is like a little boy, he looks up to his idols Sydney and Melbourne, always trying to be better than them, as the years past, Brisbane is starting to grow up, surpassing his idols Sydney and Melbourne that he used to look up, now Brisbane is getting stronger by the day, even though year by year, he takes on new challenges, Sometimes he fails, he gets up and faces it and recovers from the devastating failure. But he has a friend that stands by him, his friend's name is Climate, he gives him water for him to drink each week, but sometimes climate is forgetful, Sometimes he gives Brisbane a lot of water, making Brisbane feel like he is forced to drink all the water, when Brisbane receives too much water, his stomach feels uncomfortable making it days for him to recover from his stomach ache, Sometimes he doesn't give Brisbane water at all, this causes Brisbane to dehydrate, making him feel like a dry rock in the hot Sahara Desert, but Brisbane is learning to face challenges each day, making himself better day by day, that is why Brisbane is a strong boy.
Guys plz help me, i need to create a 200 word short personification story on brisbane. (use as much as simile, personification,metaphor)
this is what i have already (really bad)
Brisbane is like a little boy, he looks up to his idols Sydney and Melbourne, always trying to be better than them, as the years past, Brisbane is starting to grow up, surpassing his idols Sydney and Melbourne that he used to look up, now Brisbane is getting stronger by the day, even though year by year, he takes on new challenges, Sometimes he fails, he gets up and faces it and recovers from the devastating failure. But he has a friend that stands by him, his friend's name is Climate, he gives him water for him to drink each week, but sometimes climate is forgetful, Sometimes he gives Brisbane a lot of water, making Brisbane feel like he is forced to drink all the water, when Brisbane receives too much water, his stomach feels uncomfortable making it days for him to recover from his stomach ache, Sometimes he doesn't give Brisbane water at all, this causes Brisbane to dehydrate, making him feel like a dry rock in the hot Sahara Desert, but Brisbane is learning to face challenges each day, making himself better day by day, that is why Brisbane is a strong boy.
