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mehak sharma   
Feb 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Money should be spent on space centers or poor and needy people?Views [2]

Some people said it's good to spent on space centers while others think this money should be spent on people who are starving or needy?

In modernization Era, It has become controversial issue among our society. That we are spending a lot on Research activities whereas that money can be used on needy people. Here in this topic I would explore this issue on both extents like how useful its to expend on both aspects.

Firstly, Space centers are utmost important for society in terms of research, knowledge or technology. There is drastic change from past as Now we have various technologies that help us in daily life Such as mobile phones,Atms,internet and so on throughout the satellite systems set by these research centers it help us in a big way . Even people can know about weather casting with help of satellite systems only.

On the other hands, People that are starving for their basic needs of life. It leads to increase poverty. For example we can see that Number of people that don't have jobs, house and food even because they are illiterate .People don't have money to be well educated it can cause of poorness so here government should spent on this kind people .

Moreover, I think both sides are interrelated if Needy people would have money then they can use all new technologies Then it can be beneficial where as Technologies are necessary for coming generation in terms of leading easy going life.

To conclude, I am agree equally with both of views which have been discuss above in the essay .Rather I would say if spending money on research actives is needed then used up money on needy people is essential as well.
mehak sharma   
Feb 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Retirement should be in early age or late 70s? [5]

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mehak sharma   
Feb 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Retirement should be in early age or late 70s? [5]

Now a days, it seems that retirement age has become major issue among society .As different people have different notions so some people want it should be early and others recommend to have retirement in near about 70age.over this issue I would talk about both Sides.

Firstly, some people who want that retirement should be in early age .it can be effect their future growth. Such instance if some people retired in early as roundabout 50 ages then rest of age they will have to start their career again to cater to their basic need. That can be risky or unsafe for long time.

Secondly, Retirement time in late 70s it can lead to bad performance wherever person is working. The idea of late retirement can cause of companies adverse circumstances or status. Such as an aged person will not perform better because of health issues .one more things Due to this our young generation couldn't get more exposure to prove their selves' .So here our economy can deprived of new talent in market.

Moreover, If in early age it has pros and cons then on the other hand in late 70s it will more risky for several reasons as we discuss above in this topic.

In nutshell, I would regard to both aspects that are important for our society .In my opinion I am partially agree with above argument.
mehak sharma   
Feb 28, 2013
Writing Feedback / Corporal punishment good or bad [6]

Realy thank you so much for your reply its my first experience today with Ur site i was scared about writing topic bt thanx for this .... hope for the same in next topics....
mehak sharma   
Feb 27, 2013
Writing Feedback / Corporal punishment good or bad [6]

These days ,it observed that many parents are in favor of physical punishment to discipline their children but its a issue of society that its bad or good but i am partially agree in my point of view.

first and for the most thing is throughout punishment in schools leads to good performance.students get punished strictly which teach them how to leave in decorum with good outcomes .such as if teachers smack children to be in disciplined in early age then it leave great impact on children mind not to repeat that mistakes again in future.so here it has become one important task.

however,it has some disadvantages as well,in schools or any education center teachers commit punishment to students just to release his or her stress.it may lead then to drop off the school or some of them commit suicide due to harsh behavior of teachers .such as children who are leading lavish life mostly because they arr not under control force them to behave ill mannerly among teachers .it get them towards on wrong path.

in additional,its difficult for teachers to manage children by persuading,explain in smooth way all efforts are useless so therefore only on way is left that is corporal punishment which has quickness and effectiveness to make dacorum among students.but it should be in some limited way not should cruel manner.

to conclude .to be strict with children its good method to teach them .but in my views it should be limited way not to be heated .
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