Book Reports / Identify three seperate hardships that Mariam has encountered - need help making a thesis statement [5]

The Prompt is: Identify three seperate hardships that Mariam has encountered and discuss how each experience has shaped her personality in some way. This is what I wrote so far: In Khaled Hosseini's novel, A Thousand Splendid Suns, Mariam encountered many hardships including, being born a female and illegitimately, her lack of education and also her struggles against abuse in her arranged marriage. Is this a good thesis statement?