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d4nvu   
Mar 14, 2013
Undergraduate / I had no idea what "design" really was! ;Industrial Design Prog-California C of A [3]

Thank you for taking the time to read this. I need proof-reading, and please let me know if I addressed the prompt correctly. Thanks again! :)

A one to two-page essay must accompany your application. Your essay should address the major influences on your decision to pursue art, architecture, design, or writing. It should also address how you see yourself contributing to the CCA community, specifically with respect to the college's values, summarized below:

CCA understands the import role of artists, designers, architects, and writes in solving social, cultural, environmental, and economic problems. The educational experience we provide supports the following values:

Cultivating intellectual curiosity, risk taking, collaboration, innovation, compassion, and integrity
Fostering social justice and community engagement
Promoting diversity on our campus

As a child, both my parents worked late hours, which often left me home alone. As a result, in attempts to keep me occupied, my parents would often buy me toys to keep me entertained. I constantly kept myself busy by playing with cars, imaginary weapons, or anything else you could possibly think of. In my youth, I also discovered tools. By rummaging through my father's tools at an early age, I learned to make things work much more efficiently than they were originally. One of my hobbies was to take toys apart and put them back together- and when I broke the toy, I often would become curious as to why it no longer functioned. I tried my best to fix and address the weak points so in the future they would not break again. At this age, I had little to no idea that what I really was doing was designing. I had no idea what "design" really was, I just knew that I enjoyed it.

With such an abstract skillset, it was difficult to find a profession that actively engaged me. I was completely oblivious to Industrial Design throughout high school and college and consequently, I tried applying myself to several different majors. I gained valuable skills from courses in both sciences and business, but it wasn't until I took an engineering class that I finally found my interest in design. In this class, my teammates and I had to develop assistive technology that would help the disabled. I took the device, Life Alert, and researched the product- addressing the weak points of the device and working to improve the aesthetics and usability. It was this project that made me realize that this was what I wanted to do for the rest of my life. My curiosity and desire to always improve things had finally found a home, and it was at this point that I knew I wanted to become a designer.

These past few months I have dedicated myself to constant research and development in order to improve my design skills. Whether it be taking courses in drawing and furniture design, learning to vector on illustrator, or tirelessly sketching in my sketchbook, I have done everything In my power to prepare myself for the road ahead. There is not a day that goes by where I am not practicing and sketching to hone my skills. And I am doing these things because I have discovered that this is what I was meant to do. To me, Industrial Design is not only a job, but rather a part of who I am as a person. Grueling work and sleepless nights await me at California College of Arts, but I await them with open arms, ready for any challenge - knowing that I will only benefit from it.
d4nvu   
Mar 14, 2013
Essays / i need to write a horror story for english. i need ideas on starting it off! [7]

Just a suggestion, but if you talked more about what is happening around you, things would be a lot more frightening. You are describing the environment, and changing scenarios, but everything is from your view point so it's not as scary. I find that reading about what is happening from a third-person point of view is a lot more scary than first-person. Good luck!
d4nvu   
Mar 14, 2013
Essays / How to start essay about fame gained from the internet (Facebook Founder) [3]

Yes I agree, the idea is there, but you just need to develop it. Not to be a grammar Nazi, but the thesis should also be in present tense, not past tense. Here are some tips I found helpful throughout my college classes:

Thesis needs to say something; don't say "what" - make sure you explain "why" as well.
* Thesis to directly answer the prompt/question being asked.
* Formulaic thesis repeats the prompt/question right back into the thesis.Massage the formula to be creative and lend your own voice.
* Thesis is NEVER a question; it is a STATEMENT.
* Thesis can be more than one sentence; all depends on situation and assignment.
* Thesis is backbone of your paper, the anchor of what you're saying. Think of your body with no spine; that is an argument with no thesis.

* Without a thesis, your paper will float adrift and be lost upon the audience. Give them the pathway to chart your argument clearly!
* Thesis must come early and be direct/clear - preferably end of first section/paragraph.
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