iam24
Mar 16, 2013
Grammar, Usage / Help with sentence revision/ word choice [3]
well written..
it should be infected (as you even mentioned!)
well written..
infect (
it should be infected (as you even mentioned!)
iam24
Mar 16, 2013
Undergraduate / Pondering over the career and my aptitude; NUS - computer Engineering [9]
Dumi, could you please help me?
Dumi, could you please help me?
iam24
Mar 15, 2013
Undergraduate / Pondering over the career and my aptitude; NUS - computer Engineering [9]
Thank You! :)
could you please suggest me a suitable opening and closing para? or is what i have written apt?
Any other suggestions are also welcomed!
Thank You! :)
could you please suggest me a suitable opening and closing para? or is what i have written apt?
Any other suggestions are also welcomed!
iam24
Mar 15, 2013
Undergraduate / Pondering over the career and my aptitude; NUS - computer Engineering [9]
Please help asap..its kinda urgent! :)
Please help asap..its kinda urgent! :)
iam24
Mar 15, 2013
Undergraduate / Pondering over the career and my aptitude; NUS - computer Engineering [9]
Topic: This section is an opportunity for you to elaborate on the information you have provided earlier. You may wish to discuss a special talent, a personal experience or an activity that you have been involved in that is of relevance to the course that you are applying for at the university.
As there is only limited space (2000 characters), you are encouraged to present your ideas in focused and thoughtful manner.
I would be glad if you could review it and edit the beginning and conclusion..Please!
Pondering over the career and my aptitude,I visualize myself as a senior management position of a reputed organization based in Singapore.
During my school tenure,I have been awarded with various awards for academic excellence and have been the school topper year after year. Along with my studies I have secured coveted ranks in various Olympiads-a few of them being International rank 48 in 14th National Science Olympiad and state rank 13 in International Maths Olympiad and have been awarded with a gold medal many times for being the school topper in various science and maths Olympiads. At present, I am working on a Project in Computers to make a program using c language on "The Bank Management System".
Apart from my studies I have also been keenly interested in a number of sports and have won prizes in various quizzes, debates and symposiums, held at both inter and intra school level.
If there is one person who may be held solely responsible for spurring my interest in the field of computer engineering, it is my house helper's daughter. For sure, I grew up being intensely intrigued by computers and their mechanisms yet it was this little girl who sowed the first seed of my interest and inclination. One day, while I was working on my computer, she entered the room and stared with awe at the computer screen. Due to extreme poverty, she had never seen a mobile phone, leave alone a computer. Seeing her fascinated, I explained to her about the working of the computers. She was spellbound and asked me whether she would be able to own such a device. This strengthened my resolve, all the more, to study the subject from a renowned university given the chance. I dream of becoming a computer engineer and helping many children like her.
This will surely be possible with the course being offered by your prestigious institution.
Thank You!
Topic: This section is an opportunity for you to elaborate on the information you have provided earlier. You may wish to discuss a special talent, a personal experience or an activity that you have been involved in that is of relevance to the course that you are applying for at the university.
As there is only limited space (2000 characters), you are encouraged to present your ideas in focused and thoughtful manner.
I would be glad if you could review it and edit the beginning and conclusion..Please!
Pondering over the career and my aptitude,I visualize myself as a senior management position of a reputed organization based in Singapore.
During my school tenure,I have been awarded with various awards for academic excellence and have been the school topper year after year. Along with my studies I have secured coveted ranks in various Olympiads-a few of them being International rank 48 in 14th National Science Olympiad and state rank 13 in International Maths Olympiad and have been awarded with a gold medal many times for being the school topper in various science and maths Olympiads. At present, I am working on a Project in Computers to make a program using c language on "The Bank Management System".
Apart from my studies I have also been keenly interested in a number of sports and have won prizes in various quizzes, debates and symposiums, held at both inter and intra school level.
If there is one person who may be held solely responsible for spurring my interest in the field of computer engineering, it is my house helper's daughter. For sure, I grew up being intensely intrigued by computers and their mechanisms yet it was this little girl who sowed the first seed of my interest and inclination. One day, while I was working on my computer, she entered the room and stared with awe at the computer screen. Due to extreme poverty, she had never seen a mobile phone, leave alone a computer. Seeing her fascinated, I explained to her about the working of the computers. She was spellbound and asked me whether she would be able to own such a device. This strengthened my resolve, all the more, to study the subject from a renowned university given the chance. I dream of becoming a computer engineer and helping many children like her.
This will surely be possible with the course being offered by your prestigious institution.
Thank You!