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In my opinion, your sentence doesn't make sense when you wrote like that.
With children's minds comparable to sponges
You did not post the full sentence or at least a paragraph (seems like you missed a bracket), I can't tell what you are trying to talk about in this sentence so I just guess, excuse me if I got it wrong. First of all, "comparable" is an adj meaning something is able to be compared to something, I think you use the wrong word. Second, your sentence need a verb. Finally, if I were you, I would write it in a simple way like this: "Because children's minds is like sponges, it is easy for them to learn to see body ideals dictated by society; however, these negatively affect and change their lives."
