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Mar 26, 2013
Writing Feedback / Disadventages of the Internet ; 45 minute Essay [8]
Hi everybody:) i have been learning english and i'm going to do an important examination which ask people to write essays for 45 minutes. I hope you can help me with the essay :x
The Internet has an important part in modern life. However, it has a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, it has a lot of viruses and bad programs. Internet users have to suffer various risks such as spam or personal information leaking. Secondly, the Internet sometimes give false information. Thirdly, it is very addictive and often causes headache, near sightedness and so on. There are many children addicting to games on the internet. Some people are lazy to read books because of internet. Therefore, wwhen using the internet, be alert!
Hi everybody:) i have been learning english and i'm going to do an important examination which ask people to write essays for 45 minutes. I hope you can help me with the essay :x
The Internet has an important part in modern life. However, it has a lot of disadvantages. Firstly, it has a lot of viruses and bad programs. Internet users have to suffer various risks such as spam or personal information leaking. Secondly, the Internet sometimes give false information. Thirdly, it is very addictive and often causes headache, near sightedness and so on. There are many children addicting to games on the internet. Some people are lazy to read books because of internet. Therefore, wwhen using the internet, be alert!
