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Mar 10, 2009
Writing Feedback / Description about a friend of mine [4]
Here is a description that I wrote about a friend of mine. I don't know if it is very good and I would like you to help me change some words if necessary.
She has very dark and defined features but her beauty is very natural and refreshing. I don't have words to describe the exquisiteness in her warm, rich, chocolate eyes full of happy memories of days gone by. She has a round rosy face and a pretty smile that lights up even the gloomiest of days. Her curly chestnut hair which is always pinned up to the top of her head compliments her eyes. Her small, round nose and defined mouth are another of the many beauties she possesses. She is cute and sporty but at the same time very girly and elegant.
Here is a description that I wrote about a friend of mine. I don't know if it is very good and I would like you to help me change some words if necessary.
She has very dark and defined features but her beauty is very natural and refreshing. I don't have words to describe the exquisiteness in her warm, rich, chocolate eyes full of happy memories of days gone by. She has a round rosy face and a pretty smile that lights up even the gloomiest of days. Her curly chestnut hair which is always pinned up to the top of her head compliments her eyes. Her small, round nose and defined mouth are another of the many beauties she possesses. She is cute and sporty but at the same time very girly and elegant.
