JamieK
Apr 12, 2013
Writing Feedback / Participating in games teaches many lessons for life [4]
Thank you so much for your reply. This is just a preparation for my mid term exam at my school. The requirement for the current course is to write only 1 paragraph, so that's why the whole thing is in one big paragraph. The exam is in the next 2 days, so I just rush the process. I only looked at the paragraph one more time before I posted. (thank you for pointing those errors out <3). By the way, this is the first time I've ever posted on essayforum, so I don't really know how it works.
Hi everyone, the topic is "Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers". Suddenly, a thought pops in my head: there're so many types of games, such as: out door games (like out door activities).... What I wrote was about computer's games. Is it necessary to talk about that before digging into computer's games and how to do it? Or can I just write like above? My word count displays 476 words and the requirement is under 500.
Thank you so much for your reply. This is just a preparation for my mid term exam at my school. The requirement for the current course is to write only 1 paragraph, so that's why the whole thing is in one big paragraph. The exam is in the next 2 days, so I just rush the process. I only looked at the paragraph one more time before I posted. (thank you for pointing those errors out <3). By the way, this is the first time I've ever posted on essayforum, so I don't really know how it works.
Hi everyone, the topic is "Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing games teaches us about life. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers". Suddenly, a thought pops in my head: there're so many types of games, such as: out door games (like out door activities).... What I wrote was about computer's games. Is it necessary to talk about that before digging into computer's games and how to do it? Or can I just write like above? My word count displays 476 words and the requirement is under 500.