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Apr 16, 2015
Writing Feedback / The child labour ielts essay - working at a young age should never be encouraged [3]
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In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Essay:
Child labour has been a public concern that requently generates a great deal of heated debate. While some supporters maintain that the most effective way to educate children is on the job, I strongly believe that child labour is an act of cruelty which should never be justified under any circumstances.
Undoubtedly, the practice of child labour have distinctly negative impacts on the development of childen, physically and socially. Firstly, majority of working children were forced to do repetive jobs for very low pay in the sweatshop.
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Please help me proofread this ielts essay
In many countries, children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong while others consider it a valuable work experience, which is important for learning and taking responsibility. What is your opinion?
Essay:
Child labour has been a public concern that requently generates a great deal of heated debate. While some supporters maintain that the most effective way to educate children is on the job, I strongly believe that child labour is an act of cruelty which should never be justified under any circumstances.
Undoubtedly, the practice of child labour have distinctly negative impacts on the development of childen, physically and socially. Firstly, majority of working children were forced to do repetive jobs for very low pay in the sweatshop.
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