Writing Feedback / TOEFL:Economic growth Vs Environmental Concerns - Which is more important for a Gvt? [3]

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topic:Do you agree or disagree with following statement?To increase economic growth,goverment can neglect environmental concerns.

In mordern society,the topic of economic growth becoming more and more popular than ever before.some some people even goverment officials hold that to increase ecnomic growth we should scrifice everything including environment.however,others think that if we really want that economy can increase constantly,we could not neglect enviromental issues. I totally agree with latter cause if government ignore environmental concerns,economics may increase fast in a short term,but in long perspective,the damaging of environment will devote economics decrease ultimately.and i will present some ideas to support my point of view.

Fistly,we have much lessons about economics decreasing just because governments neglect environmental concerns.for instance,some areas in china have beautiful scenes so that the government open out that area as tourist attractions,then a lot of tourists visit that area in a short time,but the government have not attached importance to environment protection,so scenery was absent in a short term and of course the economics income from tourism trades decreased rapidly.

Secondly,government's persuit of shor-term ecnomic profits will trigger much worse enviromental pollution .the government may pay much more money to repair the polluted environment than concerns it during the process of economic growth.one of the best example is that nowadays,chinese's government spend a lot of money on the Changjiang River's administer as a result of they kept their eyes open excessively on the economic increasing and neglect environment concerns during 80th,20 century.the incidents like above are not singularly around the world,people in Brazil cut too much trees in tropical rainforest called "lung of earth".and this behavior due to a series of climate problems all of the world and increase the "green house"effect.so many countries spend countless money to fix it .

Finally,if government just take focus on increaseing economic growth and ignore environment concerns,humanity's offspring may cannot develop or even survival at all.try to think that in order to increase economic growth ,government permits merchants mine oil without limit,of course the economy will increase a lot in a short time,but if the oil are exhausted,what energy resources can our offsprings use.what is more ,if factries all of the world let out the waste gas to pollute our air without control,our offspring may do not have fresh air to breath at all.

In conclusion, government cannot neglect environmental concerns if they wants to increase economic growth constantly.on the contrary,the best method to in crease economic growth for a long term they should pay more attention for the environmental protection.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL; Should we be completely honest with the friends? [6]

Nowadays,people pay more attention to their network than before .thus,how to get along with friends is a crucial lesson for all of us .some people consider that be honesty is always the best policy and is a very important charactor of person for everyone in the world ,so we should be honest and never telling lies to our friends .others hold that although honesty is a vital for everyone, no one can be honest with their friends constantly .from my point of view,i agree with the latter,there are several reasons to support my opinon,and here i want to put forward some reasons of the most importance.

In the first place , we tell white lies for with our friend occasionally can keep them from harmful situations.take myself as example,last summer, before we have a final examination ,my friend Ann borrow me a digital dictionary to prepared the exam and this dictionary is the gift from Ann's father ,so it means a lot for her.but one day ,i broke it so brought it to the strore to fix it .after that,when Ann asking me where is the digital dictionary, i just lied to her cause i know if i telling the truth ,she must be so upset and could not preparing the exam well.finally,after the examination and i bought back the dictionalry from the store.finaaly,i told everything to Ann,she forgive me and got a high score in the final exam.

In addition,some times telling lies to our friends can also help them keep confidence in their daily life and be successful.for example ,my sister told me that she has a roommate called Grace who is not beautiful enough and always feel diffident .to help Grace be more confidence,my sister always speak highly of Grace's dresses or make her known how exellent she is .after serveral months,Grace was not as shy or feel inferior as before and recently ,my sister told me that Grace got first in a debate comepetation.

Finally ,whiles we tell lies to our friends can also protect ourselves and keep exellent a interpersonal relationship with them.one of the best example is that my mother died early when i was only ten years old but i don't want my new friends known about that cause it will make me feel so sad and cannot have a perfect communication with them.so when a new friend asking me about my mother's stuff,i just tell him or her that my mother is very busy,then change a topic with them.so telling lies have a lot of means for both our friends and ourselves.

In sum,although be honesty to other people especially friends is crucial for keeping friendship,it is also obtain benefits from telling white lies not only friends but also ourselves.therefore ,all reasons above can directly lead us to conclude that it is impossible to telling the truth to our friends all the time.