Undergraduate / May is the fifth month of the year; Why number five is important? [6]

I agree with Junisha rai that it would be better if you give more supporting sentences for the last thesis. ( Five represents the five endpoints on a star )

Overall, the essay is well-written with interesting ideas . You came up with 5 senses first which quite impressed me.
However, I feel that it is fairly disproportionate. Through the essay, the first thesis seems to dominate while other three ones are hastily written.

I suggest some more examples for things connected with 5 such as a hand with 5 fingers, 5 classical elements of the universe ( according to ancient Greek philosophers ) , 5 basic tastes and for superstition , Easter people consider 5 to be a lucky number.

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