Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

umm..
thank you..

oh yeah,, I've made a mistake in typing it yesterday. i mean lacking of power because of water..
i am going to revise it.

thank you Sean.

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

hi..

I've written a poem. I want to put this poem in my own zine..the topic of my zine is about environment..please correct my poem, i believe that i have made some mistakes in making this poem..

save my life

a single leaf's falling
swung by the wind
looking for a better place
not knowing where it goes
tree is not safe anymore
branch seems bad
lacking of water
because of water
" what should I do now?"
a simple question
but, do you understand it?

thank you so much....

Book Reports / Scout's understanding of Atticus' life - To Kill A Mockingbird -- grade 10 essay [5]

from the events she experienced and the people she met.

Scout discovered various sources of influence that ultimately lead her in understanding her father's words of understanding other people.

Scout's experience in school has helped her to understand other people better by considering their opinions. For example, when Miss Caroline offered Walter Cunningham a quarter but Walter wouldn't accept it. Scout then informed Miss Caroline that he's a Cunningham and Cunningham's never took anything that they can't pay back. Scout knew Miss Caroline didn't know that since she was unfamiliar with the town and thought about her view.

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

yes, i see..

can i ask another question besides poem?

my lecturer also asks me to make a zine..

is there any rules in making the zine?
please, give me some suggestion to make it..
^-^
thank you.

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

owh,, i will write the first few lines..calm down..yes,,I study english as my second language. I'm an Indonesian.
Thank you so much for both of you,,i think my poem is getting better than before.

I'll write it down again:

" feeling doubt"

it is gray,
as the cloud when it will rain
sounding like a bunch of nonsense
it is fancy,
burns like a spicy meal
upsetting the system and preventing all rest
it's smell like sulfuric acid
dulling the senses
it is shapeless,
as the earth we walk on
feeling doubt about you drives me insane

well, may I ask a question?
I don't know the meaning of "assailing". I've tried to find it in my dictionary but there's not the word in it.

thank you so much.

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

it is fancy,
burns like a spicy meal
upsetting the system and preventing all rest
it's smell like sulfuric acid
...your nose
it is shapeless,
as the earth we walk on
feeling doubt about you drives me insane

i don't know the word that i have to put after it's smell like sulfuric acid,,
would you like to add it?
is it better???

thank you so much..

Poetry / I have to write a senses poem for my assignment ("feeling doubt") [17]

thank you.

i think you have same opinion as me,, but i don't know how to write the word of food that has many taste so we can't feel the taste anymore,,and what should i call it in english?

i am a beginner in english,,

please help me..because i have to submit it now or saturday ( the latest time to submit it).
thank you so much for helping me..