Writing Feedback / Minimum Legal Drinking Age 21 & why it should stay there [3]

Your statement currently give a positive minded thinking, i would say it is true we need to stick to the law given by the government. Therefore i would agree with your thinking. Soon as you state this statement my heart felt for it and it is very important that we need to contribute to the government law.

Writing Feedback / City vs countryside (essay by 8th grader in Norway) [3]

Based on what you written, my experience is living in a modern city. Living in a city simply make it easy for me to get around. Education qualification is better than those in the countryside. In conclusion, i would just agreed with you on living the best in the city.