Scholarship / 'following through with hard work' - why do you deserve this sponsorship? [4]

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I am worthy of this tuition, and maintainance sponsorship because i will work hard and do whatever it takes to achieve my goal of furthuring my studies,and a life long dream of impacting change in my country,through academic excellence.I trust in myself and believe that this sponsorship will be the foundation i need to pursue my vision and abition.Therefore,this scholarship will enable to become an inspirations for others through my educational success.