elfailure
Jun 27, 2013
Writing Feedback / Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ? [11]
ok thanks for the guides! ^^
ok thanks for the guides! ^^
elfailure
Jun 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ? [11]
thanks for your reply.
no doubt I am weak in English. haha
thanks for your reply.
no doubt I am weak in English. haha
elfailure
Jun 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ? [11]
can you give me tips on topic sentence/thesis statement ? I am weak in giving that statement
can you give me tips on topic sentence/thesis statement ? I am weak in giving that statement
elfailure
Jun 11, 2013
Writing Feedback / Social networks create more harm than good to teenagers. What are your views ? [11]
In decades, there have been many advances in the technology industry. Undoubtedly, one of the most important of those advances has been the Internet.
The Internet is particularly important invention because it enables people from different country to share information with each other without travelling. It has also created social networks, whereas we can communicate with friends from other parts of the world either by sending message through typing or voice call.
Social networks like Facebook, Twitter and Skype allows us to communicate through the Internet. Facebook also can be used as a "noticeboard". For schools, teachers can create a group in Facebook and add the students into it and post a reminder message for students in the group. With this, students will be reminded when is their upcoming test and study for it and will not miss out any important things because the teacher can pass the message through Facebook and even if the students were absent, he or she will get to know.
As chatting with friends through sending message by phone and using phone to call friends just for chitchatting will cost phone bill to exceed budget, Twitter and Skype would save them from the trouble. With the Internet, chatting with friends will cost lesser compare to using phone to send message and calls. Allowing them to save money which also helps to reduce the demand of money from parents.
These then are some of the advantages of the social networks, but there are undoubtedly disadvantages too. One of the most important of these is the intrusion into the lives of others. Some teenagers are obsessed with social networks.
Teenagers who are obsessed to social networks often go online with their phone almost every hour to have their status updated. Some of them even do that during lesson and will affect their studies and eventually fail their examinations.
Teenagers that uses social networks may be get cheat because they are easy prey for scammers as they are ignorant and naive. Reports were shown in newspaper and security measures have been increased.
There are advantages and disadvantages connected with social networks. I believe that with the help of parents guidance , social network will be better and safer for teengers.
In decades, there have been many advances in the technology industry. Undoubtedly, one of the most important of those advances has been the Internet.
The Internet is particularly important invention because it enables people from different country to share information with each other without travelling. It has also created social networks, whereas we can communicate with friends from other parts of the world either by sending message through typing or voice call.
Social networks like Facebook, Twitter and Skype allows us to communicate through the Internet. Facebook also can be used as a "noticeboard". For schools, teachers can create a group in Facebook and add the students into it and post a reminder message for students in the group. With this, students will be reminded when is their upcoming test and study for it and will not miss out any important things because the teacher can pass the message through Facebook and even if the students were absent, he or she will get to know.
As chatting with friends through sending message by phone and using phone to call friends just for chitchatting will cost phone bill to exceed budget, Twitter and Skype would save them from the trouble. With the Internet, chatting with friends will cost lesser compare to using phone to send message and calls. Allowing them to save money which also helps to reduce the demand of money from parents.
These then are some of the advantages of the social networks, but there are undoubtedly disadvantages too. One of the most important of these is the intrusion into the lives of others. Some teenagers are obsessed with social networks.
Teenagers who are obsessed to social networks often go online with their phone almost every hour to have their status updated. Some of them even do that during lesson and will affect their studies and eventually fail their examinations.
Teenagers that uses social networks may be get cheat because they are easy prey for scammers as they are ignorant and naive. Reports were shown in newspaper and security measures have been increased.
There are advantages and disadvantages connected with social networks. I believe that with the help of parents guidance , social network will be better and safer for teengers.
