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Jun 14, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS task2 : How should visitors behave when they travel in other countries? [3]

Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour .Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Since the modern means of transport and travelling have made it easier for people to visit other countries ,local ,public and international interests in cultural differences start to be raised as an important issue. The arguments whether local people should accept these differences or that the foreign visitors should commit themselves to local customs and traditions can be discussed from many perspectives such as social and economic aspects.I personally believe, visitors to other countries should respect the local traditions and customs while in return local people ensure fulfilling visitors expectations and meet their level of satisfaction.

To begin with,visitors from different countries can represent tourists who are interested in exploring the local attractions of a country,this can have a great influence on that country economy helping it positively which in turn will reflect indirectly in good way on local people income,this can be a rational reason why they have to accept cultural differences.Furthermore,some of these visitors can be highly qualified and might introduce useful skills and qualities to local people so as to promote their qualifications and abilities.

However,some people argue that visitors could be regarded as a significant indirect cause of cultural identities loss by introducing what might be considered to those locals as a bad or inappropriate habit or customs.Although this might be partially true ,still it is almost impossible to apply rules or guidelines to those visitors to be followed.

In conclusion, tourism and visitors are considered as important sectors of economy to countries.In my opinion, I think visitors are expected to behave appropriately in ways where local people can not negatively perceive them as modulators or regard their behaviors or customs as an intruding ones.
medoo   
Jun 14, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Advertisements make us waste money, or make our life easier? [7]

Hi Shumaila, I'm new to this website but I've just finished an IELTS preparation course here in British council- Sudan ,, it was v. useful in writing section,, YES you still have to write about the other opposing arguments ,opinions, as this is considered a key part of task achievement even if the Qs directly ask you about which opinion you support.regarding the words limit do not it's ok to write over 250 or even over 300 as long as your arguments and opinions are presented logically and progressively.
medoo   
Jun 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS-Smoking kills and hence should be banned! [5]

you should avoid using too informal language such as this '' in the second paragraph i will mention... you can't write as you speak or think this gives a bad impression ,, start the paragraph directly with your main idea ,support it with examples..
medoo   
Jun 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS: Advertisements make us waste money, or make our life easier? [7]

it looks like IELTS task 2 essay : you have discussed one opinion of the task and added your own opinion in a good developed way, but you still needed at least one more paragraph to highlight why could other people argue it is a waste of money & supporting this with examples, by doing this you will cover all points in a balanced way in order to fulfill the task achievement's part of assessment.
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