Tareqkh
Jun 16, 2013
Writing Feedback / TOEFL-ETS Some people believe that automobiles are useful and necessary. [2]
Hi All,
I'm trying to write about this subject because I'm preparing to the TOFEL after a week.
Please I need some help because I feel confused.
Some people believe that automobiles are useful and necessary. Others believe that automobiles cause problems that affect our health and well-being. Which position do you support? Give specific reasons for your answer.
I support and believe that automobiles are useful and necessary for my life because it keeps you more flexible to do all your work very easy. For example, when I was in my country I used to drive a car and do all my work easy, but when I came to United States everything become more difficult for me because I need to wait a bus or ride my bike to the school and that means more harder than when I was in my country. Although, when I need to go to my vacation that means I need to rent a car and that cost a lot of money.
Hi All,
I'm trying to write about this subject because I'm preparing to the TOFEL after a week.
Please I need some help because I feel confused.
Some people believe that automobiles are useful and necessary. Others believe that automobiles cause problems that affect our health and well-being. Which position do you support? Give specific reasons for your answer.
I support and believe that automobiles are useful and necessary for my life because it keeps you more flexible to do all your work very easy. For example, when I was in my country I used to drive a car and do all my work easy, but when I came to United States everything become more difficult for me because I need to wait a bus or ride my bike to the school and that means more harder than when I was in my country. Although, when I need to go to my vacation that means I need to rent a car and that cost a lot of money.
