chiphan38
Jun 21, 2013
Writing Feedback / Let various boards maintain their autonomy in preparing curriculum [7]
Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are educated. It is the reason for why our lives are more and more safe and the number of crimes decrease rapidly now. Therefore, keeping capital punishment is unnecessary.
The fact that a large number of people believe the death penalty is an essential factor to reduce violence and keep our society secure. However, the recent research of scientists point out "having no relation between the rate of crime and the death penalty". Indeed, when a person commits crime he does not think carefully which punishment he will be received, hence the capital punishment does not have the effect to stop a person commits crime. American is a clear example. In American having a lot of criminals received "the worst punishment", but American is also the country has the highest rate of crime.
Moreover, elimination is not the main purpose of punishment; the punishment should fit the crime. In my opinion, toleration is the best way to make a secure society and to reduce the crime. In some situations when we are so quick to convict someone of a crime without verification. They will be under sentence of death; this action makes negative impacts on society. On the other hands, the life imprisonment is the suitable punishment for criminals who commit serious offences. It is not only show the toleration society but also help them fixing their mistakes.
To sum up, I strongly recommend that we should reject the death penalty because it is not effective to make safe for our society. Additionally, without capital punishment people will fell the toleration of law.
Our country is developing and step by step becomes a civilization country where the vast majority of people are educated. It is the reason for why our lives are more and more safe and the number of crimes decrease rapidly now. Therefore, keeping capital punishment is unnecessary.
The fact that a large number of people believe the death penalty is an essential factor to reduce violence and keep our society secure. However, the recent research of scientists point out "having no relation between the rate of crime and the death penalty". Indeed, when a person commits crime he does not think carefully which punishment he will be received, hence the capital punishment does not have the effect to stop a person commits crime. American is a clear example. In American having a lot of criminals received "the worst punishment", but American is also the country has the highest rate of crime.
Moreover, elimination is not the main purpose of punishment; the punishment should fit the crime. In my opinion, toleration is the best way to make a secure society and to reduce the crime. In some situations when we are so quick to convict someone of a crime without verification. They will be under sentence of death; this action makes negative impacts on society. On the other hands, the life imprisonment is the suitable punishment for criminals who commit serious offences. It is not only show the toleration society but also help them fixing their mistakes.
To sum up, I strongly recommend that we should reject the death penalty because it is not effective to make safe for our society. Additionally, without capital punishment people will fell the toleration of law.
