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Writing a report based on our country data's; any alternative?

I need help on a report written based on our country data's. I got the data's and information directly from the institution for educational purpose. If I post it here, there is a chance that the institution might find their information from here. I have a fear that it might be an issue. But since my writing is poor, I need constructive feedback for my report for me to improve. Is there any other alternative. Please help

Kind regards