eko_widianto Jul 24, 2013Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: The problems created by unlimited use of cars [4] idea not bad. vocab good. but grammar seems to be your main problem. improve your grammar
eko_widianto Jul 24, 2013Undergraduate / I believe that I am a good student; PERSONAL STATEMENT - WARWICK HEFP [6] and a little more, the first few sentences.. i think it is no need to write it. just replace it with your ability.
eko_widianto Jul 24, 2013Undergraduate / I believe that I am a good student; PERSONAL STATEMENT - WARWICK HEFP [6] Since then, I realized that I had shown a significant improvement. Then I did some research into university that provides finance degreeshould be financial degreeEventually I found out that Warwick University is one of the best Business degree universitys in the worldI am looking forward to building a career in financial sectorThe reason I choose financial degree
eko_widianto Jul 24, 2013Undergraduate / I believe that I am a good student; PERSONAL STATEMENT - WARWICK HEFP [6] heyi find out the reason yo wanted to study there is quite good. but maybe could you state / add more about what is/are your specialization or what you think that you are unique and different from others? it may add better impression.
eko_widianto Jul 15, 2013Grammar, Usage / 'Class who is absent..' - Which is more appropriate to say? [14] for what i think, the first one is to the point while the second one, you still need to ask who after asking the "do we have absent today"
