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Jul 15, 2013
Writing Feedback / Have we harmed the Earth or made it a better place? [6]
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, global warming is the most important issue in every country. A large number of people think that any human activities cause damage to the Earth. However, many people believe that the Earth is better than ever due to human activities. Before identifying my opinion, careful discussion is required.
On the one hand, some human activities make the Earth to change for the worse. For instance, using air conditioning, driving, and deforestation for furniture bring about toxic pollution to the air. Those lead to climate change in the North Pole which the glacier is melted by effect of higher temperature from human activities. If people still do the bad activities, the Earth will be harmed and become to an unsolvable issue.
On the other hand, although some activities of human make trouble to the world, many activities help the world to be a better place. For example, many people around the world enjoy growing the plants and reduce to using paper and focus on recycle paper and plastic increasingly. It decreases air pollution and make temperature to go down. Moreover, some people like to ride bicycle which decrease the global warming too.
In the final analysis, human activities have both of benefits and drawbacks which depend on conscious of people that will choose to do which one. According to my opinion, I think that human activities can make the Earth to be a better place to live if people thing carefully before doing anything. I predict that the Earth will exist with us forever only people help together look after the Earth.
Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
effect of human activities on our planet
Nowadays, global warming is the most important issue in every country. A large number of people think that any human activities cause damage to the Earth. However, many people believe that the Earth is better than ever due to human activities. Before identifying my opinion, careful discussion is required.
On the one hand, some human activities make the Earth to change for the worse. For instance, using air conditioning, driving, and deforestation for furniture bring about toxic pollution to the air. Those lead to climate change in the North Pole which the glacier is melted by effect of higher temperature from human activities. If people still do the bad activities, the Earth will be harmed and become to an unsolvable issue.
On the other hand, although some activities of human make trouble to the world, many activities help the world to be a better place. For example, many people around the world enjoy growing the plants and reduce to using paper and focus on recycle paper and plastic increasingly. It decreases air pollution and make temperature to go down. Moreover, some people like to ride bicycle which decrease the global warming too.
In the final analysis, human activities have both of benefits and drawbacks which depend on conscious of people that will choose to do which one. According to my opinion, I think that human activities can make the Earth to be a better place to live if people thing carefully before doing anything. I predict that the Earth will exist with us forever only people help together look after the Earth.
