Writing Feedback / TOEFL; GRADES ARE A GOOD INDICATOR FOR ASSESSING STUDENTS [4]

you should seriously consider improving your english...ur making far too many grammatical mistakes...also the position you take isnt clear...and also u have used very few examples

Writing Feedback / GRE ISSUE: People most respect the powerful not when they exercise their power, ..... [3]

This essay will fetch you a 3 or 3.5 out of 6...You need to provide more reasons to support your claim. Additionally, you also need to consider situations where the position you hold might not be valid anymore...for eg.. in a dire situation like a curfew would u rather the govt sit cap in hand or act??

anyways..your essay surely has a flow...and it shows u r good at english