Writing Feedback / Truth is most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent [2]

It has been debatable for many years whether telling the truth is the foremost important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people or not. Consequently, it needs to be discussed carefully. Some people agree with the statement; however, others disagree with the premise argued by the author. I myself believe that it depends on the situation as described below.

To begin with, telling the truth is the most important factor in making a romantic relationship persistent between a man and a woman who want to get along with each other. In other words, telling the truth is one of the best ways to conquer the heart of loved ones. For example, I have had a girl friend since I was an undergraduate student, about for eight years. During this long time, we never lied to each other, and we still love each other in spite of facing lots of problems. I strongly believe that it happened just because never did we lie together. This is why I believe that telling the truth is the most important consideration in romantic relationships between people.

On the other hand, the statement, telling the truth, is not always the critical consideration in any relationship between people. For example, I do not agree to tell the truth about your personal life or things like that to your coworker at the first day you meet him or her, because you do not know him or her well. As another example, you might did something wrong, a minor mistake not a big one, when you were a teen. Telling your story, even if it is a truth, to your job interviewers would kill your chance for obtaining the job position that you have been looking for in a long time. This example clarifies that why I believe that telling the truth is not always the best option.

To sum it up, the author argues that people should tell the truth in all situations as it is the most important consideration in any kinds of relationship among people. I partly agree with the author; however, I think that making a decision to tell or not to tell the truth fundamentally depends on the situation. We should always tell the truth in our romantic relationships, while it is not necessarily to tell the truth for other types of relationships, like relationships we may have in our workplace.

Writing Feedback / High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. [2]

Whether it is better or worse for students to just study the courses they are interested in is the question stated by the author that needs to be reviewed carefully. Some people believe that it is better to let students choose their favorite courses; however, another group of people maintains an opposite opinion regarding that students should study the syllabi determined by the high schools. Both ideas have their own merits in my opinion.

Should high school students be able to study whatever they want, they may pay more attention to their studies. Students will diligently work on their assignments if they study the materials they like or the courses related to their future goals, even though there is a broad spectrum of interesting courses that they can learn, ranging from literature and politics to natural sciences. For example, if a student wants to become a famous poet in the future, he or she definitely prefers to attend literature classes rather than science classes. By contrast, everyone who loves conducting research in biology likes to study life sciences. On this way, not only will students enjoy attending their classes but also they will study hard to be prepared well for their favorite future careers.

On the other hand, some people believe that all the high schools must provide the best curriculum they can for their students. First of all, they believe that the better courses you teach high school students, the better generation you will have in future. In their opinions, the best possible curriculum is the one that is determined by experts, not students. Therefore, they make students take the courses presented by the high schools. Furthermore, high school students should not focus on a specific topic, for they need to study everything from literature to mathematics. This would help them find their ways for the future. For example, from my own experiences, when I was a high school student I wanted to become a physicist before I began to study biology. The biology courses I took in that time opened doors for me to enter university in the field of life science.

To sum it up, I think that both opinions have their own advantages and disadvantages. One may persuade students to energetically attend their classes because they will be thought the courses they like. The other one makes students study all the assigned courses whether they like them or not, helping them to attain knowledge about different topics. I strongly believe that the two mentioned scenarios should be integrated into a third scenario in that students take both the courses they like and the courses suggested by the high schools' principles simultaneously.