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Sep 2, 2013
Writing Feedback / "my worst day in recent memory"; College Essay [2]
Hello to anyone who make be reading this. I am having trouble typing a descriptive essay about "my worst day in recent memory" for my College English 1101 class. So far, I have only typed an introductory paragraph, which could be seen below this excerpt. It is urgent that I get some kind of guidance with this essay because it is due in two days and I am having the worst case of writer's block ever! CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME?!
Never, in a million years, would I have imagined that the most terrifying day of my thirteen-year-old life would take place in a city so imperial and historical- our nation's capital, Washington DC. The unfamiliar sites of bumblebee-toned taxis and belligerent commuters from all walks of life were enough to make me want to ball up in the fetal position. That was the exact feeling I felt when visiting Washington DC for the inauguration of our current, forty-four president, Barack Obama. As lucky as I was to be chosen to be a part of such a once-in-a-lifetime-chance event, I wasn't having much luck in the "City of Freedom".
Hello to anyone who make be reading this. I am having trouble typing a descriptive essay about "my worst day in recent memory" for my College English 1101 class. So far, I have only typed an introductory paragraph, which could be seen below this excerpt. It is urgent that I get some kind of guidance with this essay because it is due in two days and I am having the worst case of writer's block ever! CAN SOMEONE PLEASE HELP ME?!
Never, in a million years, would I have imagined that the most terrifying day of my thirteen-year-old life would take place in a city so imperial and historical- our nation's capital, Washington DC. The unfamiliar sites of bumblebee-toned taxis and belligerent commuters from all walks of life were enough to make me want to ball up in the fetal position. That was the exact feeling I felt when visiting Washington DC for the inauguration of our current, forty-four president, Barack Obama. As lucky as I was to be chosen to be a part of such a once-in-a-lifetime-chance event, I wasn't having much luck in the "City of Freedom".
