bhickey0827
Sep 15, 2013
Writing Feedback / memo introducing myself. help: mechanicalism and grammar [4]
To: Janice Turner
From: Brittany Hickey
Date: 9/15/2013
Re: Introductory Memo
Background
My name is Brittany Hickey. I am from Benoit's Cove, Newfoundland. I am in my second year of university. Last term I enrolled in general studies, this term I am starting my Bachelor of Business Administration. I decided to make this my career path because of my current job position.
Interests
Since I was in primary school, I was good at math. Which lead to take extra math courses throughout my school life. I also enjoy learning about local business's and how they became successful. It's interesting to know how much money one company makes during a week span.
Achievements
During high school I received honors each year. I also won the class award for my nutrition class. Last term in university I got an 88 average in Math 1000. Some achievements at my work; employee of the month, promotion to supervisor, and attendance award. During the summer I also received a small scholarship from my work towards my degree.
Expectations
In this course I am looking forward to learning how to write professionally. Learning how to do research on certain proposals and present them. The least thing I am looking forward to is presentations. I am shy and nerves tend to get the best of me.
To: Janice Turner
From: Brittany Hickey
Date: 9/15/2013
Re: Introductory Memo
Background
My name is Brittany Hickey. I am from Benoit's Cove, Newfoundland. I am in my second year of university. Last term I enrolled in general studies, this term I am starting my Bachelor of Business Administration. I decided to make this my career path because of my current job position.
Interests
Since I was in primary school, I was good at math. Which lead to take extra math courses throughout my school life. I also enjoy learning about local business's and how they became successful. It's interesting to know how much money one company makes during a week span.
Achievements
During high school I received honors each year. I also won the class award for my nutrition class. Last term in university I got an 88 average in Math 1000. Some achievements at my work; employee of the month, promotion to supervisor, and attendance award. During the summer I also received a small scholarship from my work towards my degree.
Expectations
In this course I am looking forward to learning how to write professionally. Learning how to do research on certain proposals and present them. The least thing I am looking forward to is presentations. I am shy and nerves tend to get the best of me.