Undergraduate / Significant Challenge (MIT Essay): The Autism Pursuit [3]

Its a great essay, but i don't feel like you answered the prompt. It asks about a challenge and how you overcame it? you speak about a project that you did and how it faced difficulties, but i feel the reader would have trouble identifying it as a challenge. Try to make it sound more like a story, with a plot, a protagonist and a result. The grammar is good. and you should talk a little more about yourself. great essay, i'm sure you could also use this as it is for something else