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Oct 8, 2013
Undergraduate / I come from two different cultures; UC Personal Statement [6]
Your bi-cultural identity is a great topic for the "World You Come From" essay. To improve this essay, think about the following questions:
1) How are Chinese and Mexican cultures different? How are they similar?
2) How has growing up in two different cultures affected the way you look at the world?
3) Is this essay about how being bullied influenced your interest in psychology? Or is it about your identity? At the moment, these two themes are mixed together.
Your bi-cultural identity is a great topic for the "World You Come From" essay. To improve this essay, think about the following questions:
1) How are Chinese and Mexican cultures different? How are they similar?
2) How has growing up in two different cultures affected the way you look at the world?
3) Is this essay about how being bullied influenced your interest in psychology? Or is it about your identity? At the moment, these two themes are mixed together.
