jetblack
Oct 21, 2013
Undergraduate / great culture and location; University of Michigan - Supplemental Essay (#2) [5]
"Research is also especially important when Research is also especially important when you're looking to go into medicine like I am."
Watch out for small errors like this one. You accidentally repeated yourself.
My overall impression is that this won't be a very strong essay. It sounds too generic. Try doing some research on the university, watch some youtube videos where students that attend UM talk about their experience. This should help you craft a better essay. Good luck.
"Research is also especially important when Research is also especially important when you're looking to go into medicine like I am."
Watch out for small errors like this one. You accidentally repeated yourself.
My overall impression is that this won't be a very strong essay. It sounds too generic. Try doing some research on the university, watch some youtube videos where students that attend UM talk about their experience. This should help you craft a better essay. Good luck.
