Undergraduate / Eight houses, four cities, four different schools; UC-world you come from [3]


This seems very negative, like there is no one in the world you can depend on. This may come off as someone who cannot work with others. I do understand where you are coming from 100% though. I have experienced a much similar time. I understand the pain, resentment and unfairness and inability to trust/rely on others. But for this application it is important to try to take something positive away which I think you have explained well but I think it needs to be reinforced in the last sentence rather than having it sound pessimistic.