Writing Feedback / Process Anaylsis Essay in 5 paragraphs (CompTIA Network+ Exam) [5]

1. help readers either perform the steps or understand how something works
2. present the essential steps in the process
3. explain the steps in detail
4. arrange the steps in logical order
No he, she, me, I, or you's
last sentence of the first paragraph must be the thesis statement.
must be 5 paragraphs long

How to Pass the CompTIA Network+ Exam

The CompTIA Network+ exam is a computer-based exam composed of multiple-choice questions with no educational requirements. The certification accredits the knowledge of networking professionals with at least nine months of experience in the computer networking field. It is, however, possible to pass the exam with no working experience by taking an online course, making flashcards, and utilizing online knowledge resources.

Southeast Community College offers an online Network+ certification preparation course. The course will take six weeks to complete, with lessons given out biweekly. The lessons are like chapters in a book, explaining the various topics for the exam. It is very import that to take notes while reading each lesson. In order to fully retain the information learned, a few hours after taking the notes, go back and review them.

The next day, cut pieces of colored construction paper into sixth. These scratch papers will become paramount to passing the exam. On the different colored pieces of paper write down words and definitions, questions and answers, and different types of networking strategies. The different colors on the flashcards help one to remember things during the exam in the same way doodling is suggested to help with note taking. The flash cards are to be reviewed every day until the exam.

Once the online course has been completed, the next step is to find a few additional resources of information to ensure every topic for the exam has been thoroughly covered. There are several online resources available, and some are better than others. The website, proprofs.com, is an excellent resource that provides additional lessons, test questions, and forum threads. Read through as much of the information that time will allow, and continue to add information and review the colored flash cards.

CompTIA's Network+ certification can be obtained through the right combination of study habits and materials. The local community college provides an online course with information handed out incrementally, allowing the student to study each topic thoroughly. While using flash cards is valuable, adding the simple touch of using colored flashcards will increase the chances of passing the exam. After completion of the online course, it is highly recommended to spend some time online taking practice tests and reading through related forum posts for additional study. While the Network+ certification is designed to show someone has nine or more months of work related experience, in six short weeks, it is possible to become certified with no related work experience.

Writing Feedback / Description Essay: The Rider [7]

This is a description essay. It is to have an introduction, 3 supporting paragraphs, and a concusion. The conclusion is to be made up of 1) repsonce statement to topic 2)summary statement about each subtopic 3)clincher (gives you soemthing to chew on)

I am not a very descriptive person and this was very difficult for me. If you a way to better describe something please add that too. I do no think i have enough sentences in this piece.

The Rider

Riding a Suzuki Katana motorcycle down an open highway can be quite a liberating experience, unlike the rather mundane affair of driving in typical enclosed automobile. Everything that is felt is enhanced. The rider's sense of smells, sights, and feelings are stimulated to such an extreme that even the familiar seems strange.

The smells surround the rider like a gentle mist of aromas. Everything that passes by tickles the sinuses. The smell of lilies, daisy, trees, and fields of wheat are euphoric. While riding on a motorcycle, there are no windows to hide behind to retreat from the smell of a sweltering cattle lot, an angry skunk or the pungent odor of fresh road kill. Perhaps the only downfall to enjoying these smells is not being able to block out the obnoxious odors that aggravate the otherwise harmonious experience. The only option is to drive as fast as possible to escape to uncontaminated air again.

The horizon goes on forever. No boundaries of frames to encroach upon the view to lessen the experience. The many shades of blue seep into the sky like a spilled bottle of ink. The trees are as green as can be, and their branches swim like in a sea. The scenery becomes part of the rider and the rider part of the scenery. This creates an overwhelming sense of freedom.

The fresh air is free to be greedily absorbed, while basking in the sunlight. The air is thick and has a consistency of its own. Its touch is evident. Every bump in the road revels itself with an unmatched authority, and every winding turn pushes the earth on its side.

The ride down the highway once was done as a form of transportation, but while on a motorcycle, it becomes an experience out of the ordinary. While on the open road, the rider gains the ability to smell each individual creature of nature. The rider has limitless vision on the world that surrounds her. The feelings of freedoms that the road offers are just as life was meant to be. There is nothing that can compare to rolling down the road, taking in everything that the motorcycle has to give.