Writing Feedback / My cousin [3]

My cousin Cherine is from Europe she went to visit us last summer.She's 11years old she's tall , she has got a round face , big eyes ans straight hair .She is intellegent but she is very noisy we have little commun she loves football I hate it I'm mad about music she not intersted to much in as you can imagine we didn't have a very good time together we were really getting on each others i hope that she 'll change..

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