ebele17
Nov 8, 2013
Undergraduate / Students and Staff ; unique qualities of Northwestern [4]
This paragraph is a bit disjointed and drifts a way from the main essay. i feel you should modify it and try to fit it in. you are trying to express a diverse and multicultural background as one of the unique qualities of the school and how you would love to get to know, interact and be influenced by these people from different walks of life and how it will also play a vital role in your learning experience.
"My passion for learning will be complemented by the presence of a well integrated multicultural environment consisting of people with various stories, experiences and unique characters which i would love to interact with and experience to the fullest. My belief in the uniqueness of people has broadened my mind and in turn pushed me to seek exposure to their various capabilities and accomplishments as well as their histories. Northwest, with its balance of theory and social learning, is the ideal place for me to experience and gain first hand knowledge in my quest for changing and re-shaping the future".
well, i hope this helps and i hope i am not completely off point.
I believe everyone should approach others with an open mind; everyone has a unique story, and none should be overlooked. I aspire to study the interactions of people, learn about history as well as how to shape the future, and experience as many cultures as I can. I also want to find myself invigorated by new passions
This paragraph is a bit disjointed and drifts a way from the main essay. i feel you should modify it and try to fit it in. you are trying to express a diverse and multicultural background as one of the unique qualities of the school and how you would love to get to know, interact and be influenced by these people from different walks of life and how it will also play a vital role in your learning experience.
"My passion for learning will be complemented by the presence of a well integrated multicultural environment consisting of people with various stories, experiences and unique characters which i would love to interact with and experience to the fullest. My belief in the uniqueness of people has broadened my mind and in turn pushed me to seek exposure to their various capabilities and accomplishments as well as their histories. Northwest, with its balance of theory and social learning, is the ideal place for me to experience and gain first hand knowledge in my quest for changing and re-shaping the future".
well, i hope this helps and i hope i am not completely off point.
