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Name: Ankita kak
Joined: Nov 9, 2013
Last Post: Nov 11, 2013
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Nov 11, 2013
Letters / Letter of Recommendation- from Project manager for graduate school application [3]

Its a pleasure to write a recommendation for Anya who has applied to pursue graduate studies at XXXX university.
As the project manager in ABC Private Ltd., I have known Anya for the last 2 years as an application engineer . She is responsible for handling projects related to governors for the steam turbines and compressors in ABC. Before joining as a full time position here, she proved her mettle as an intern for 7 months. During that period she proved her technical abilities and skills.

Though working in the domain of power and control systems presents many critical challenges, Anya has been quite adept in handling a number of projects. Based on her proficiency she is engaged in extensive discussions with ABC clients for preparation and finalization of design of the project. Her ability to deliver good quality output in spite of stringent deadlines has earned her appreciation from all around. Over the time I have known her, she has willingly accepted new assignments and performed her tasks well. Her proficiency in CAD and related ABC software has contributed immensely in projects success. Also, in order that she's able to quench her thirst for knowledge, she's ever on the lookout for new information, updates in the current projects which is she's working for. I believe her experience in dealing diverse projects and her strong technical knowledge of control systems makes her at par with other experienced engineers.

Not only she has consistently performed her role with competence, but she also goes an extra mile to help out other team members. Recently she was assigned an extra duty of training the team members on a ABC product which she readily accepted and was successful in doing so. Her exceptional interpersonal and communication skills makes her an indispensable asset of our team.

I am sure that Anya would be an excellent asset to any research team she wishes to join and a successful researcher in her chosen field. Graduate studies would be a continuation of her development process and will help her to achieve new horizons. I feel that she has the necessary intelligence, diligence and persistence to complete the program successfully. So, I strongly recommend her, without any hesitation, for admission to your university. I wish her good luck for all her future endeavors.
star101   
Nov 11, 2013
Graduate / I have strong analytical skills ; SOP for MS in Telecommunication [4]

bourne29
I have strong analytical skills and have a solid background in the field of Telecommunication. I am self-motivated and have the required learning agility. I have always been inquisitive and thirsty for knowledge and hence I look to <Univ Name > to provide me an opportunity for pursuing MS in <Name of the Prog>.

Every consecutive line is starting from 'I'. You could try and change it.
star101   
Nov 10, 2013
Graduate / Perfection is a state in life; SOP/ MSC subsea engineering. [5]

I am confident that this degree in Subsea engineering will be instrumental in my objective of becoming an expert in subsea engineering and also the stimulus need in establishing myself as a renowned engineer in the oil and gas sector in Nigeria. I believe my interest in subsea engineering, skills along with my hard-working and flexible personality give me confidence to apply for a place in the subsea engineering program at your great citadel of learning. I am sure that I would be a valuable student and also believe that collaboration with your highly professional faculty will bring me closer to my aspirations - excellence in the field of subsea engineering.

All the lines are starting with "I" . Try putting the second line in the above para in a different way.
star101   
Nov 9, 2013
Graduate / WHY NOT? ; MS Automobile Engineering/ SOP [4]

I won accolades in debates, dramatics and other such events. I have also showcased my leadership abilities by being one of the chief organizers in many events that took place throughout my under graduation.

You could try and be more specific here I feel. Try & explain how you you proved to be a better leader or organizer.
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