Writing Feedback / toefl writing task 2, Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources [5]

Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such
as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is
disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific
reasons and examples to support your opinion.
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in a time of great strides in technology and medicine the simple person will certainly enjoy the abundance in the products and the easy life that our era rejoiced.

although those strides are beneficial to us.the behemoth of a production and consumption had caused the lost of some important natural resources. namely clean water .

which i believe is the more critical to our survival.

firstly . the shortage in clean water will certainly led us to a major detrimental scenarios .such as no water to drink .no meaning to tilling the land and plow it.which

this will led us to some nightmares .for instance the famine in AFRICA is largely due to a shortage in clean water .were the odds of dying by dehydration is

highly possible thus a more death rate amongst the infant and elderly .

secondly as we dwell in the realm of constant gluttony in resources clean watter will radically alter to a new rare metal or it will be compared to

oil which will sadly creates some grotesque hurdles to the endeavour of our societies and economies .this will certainly stem some ramification .to better
encapsulate this situation .some countries for instance NIGER . MALI are suffering form drought since the nineties .which has some pernicious effects on
the countries s capital .thus a hard time to recover due to a modicum population and water resources .

finally . we ought to be keenly aware of the acute situation it s not a joke the task to provide water for the world s population .especially that the increase in the production

and the world population is making it extremely hard .the neat person is always afraid that humanity may fall in a bottomless hole .we must do our utmost

to impede it .