BryanM7
Nov 13, 2013
Undergraduate / I came from a big family consist of six brothers and 5 sisters ; PERSONAL STATEMENT [3]
Good essay, you could work on the way your essay flows.
Good essay, you could work on the way your essay flows.
BryanM7
Nov 13, 2013
Writing Feedback / Expanding a ban on texting, talking on the phone and internet access while driving [5]
College girl 13
. This sentence is awkward "To make the road a safer place for everyone, but they government can't make people in the car stop talking to each other that's not breaking a law that's freedom of speech."
College girl 13
. This sentence is awkward "To make the road a safer place for everyone, but they government can't make people in the car stop talking to each other that's not breaking a law that's freedom of speech."