stephcurry30
Nov 16, 2013
Undergraduate / My childhood and how it applies to me today - UC / World I come from [4]
I've added this so far to my essay. Do you have any suggestions to how I could tie everything together in a conclusion? I really appreciate the feedback.
After becoming a little more accustomed to food, my family and I visited Owakudani, a valley where there are hot springs. Eggs hard-boiled in the hot springs turn black because of the sulfur and is rumored to make one live longer. I was able to try one of these special eggs, which was cool. When I had touched back down at home, I was inclined to learn more about food and developed a great interest in making food. I spent one of my childhood summers watching hours and hours of the Food Network, taking notes on not only the basics, but eventually how to "spruce" them up and make them my own. Starting from scrambling eggs, I eventually learned how to prepare complicated dishes for my parents and I to try. My first memory with banana bread was when I was seven, from a patient of my mom, who would bring some back home every so often. The taste is so unique; it is unlike any other type of bread. The sweetness and soft consistency of the bread is just wonderful.
I've added this so far to my essay. Do you have any suggestions to how I could tie everything together in a conclusion? I really appreciate the feedback.
After becoming a little more accustomed to food, my family and I visited Owakudani, a valley where there are hot springs. Eggs hard-boiled in the hot springs turn black because of the sulfur and is rumored to make one live longer. I was able to try one of these special eggs, which was cool. When I had touched back down at home, I was inclined to learn more about food and developed a great interest in making food. I spent one of my childhood summers watching hours and hours of the Food Network, taking notes on not only the basics, but eventually how to "spruce" them up and make them my own. Starting from scrambling eggs, I eventually learned how to prepare complicated dishes for my parents and I to try. My first memory with banana bread was when I was seven, from a patient of my mom, who would bring some back home every so often. The taste is so unique; it is unlike any other type of bread. The sweetness and soft consistency of the bread is just wonderful.