amandalazar
Nov 29, 2013
Research Papers / introductory paragraph about the negative impact of Facebook [2]
My research question is "How has facebook impacted society in a negative way?" My thesis is "Facebook has ultimately created some adverse impacts on society. People are now being exposed to the outgrowth of generating privacy issues, cyber-bulling, and the lack of face to face interaction and socialization."
I'm concerned in making my introductory paragraph flow and sound interesting. I was hoping someone could help me accomplish this? Please tell me if my thesis is poor and what I should fix too. Thank you so much your help means a lot.
My research question is "How has facebook impacted society in a negative way?" My thesis is "Facebook has ultimately created some adverse impacts on society. People are now being exposed to the outgrowth of generating privacy issues, cyber-bulling, and the lack of face to face interaction and socialization."
I'm concerned in making my introductory paragraph flow and sound interesting. I was hoping someone could help me accomplish this? Please tell me if my thesis is poor and what I should fix too. Thank you so much your help means a lot.
