cw88
Apr 28, 2009
Essays / Stuck on intro to my essay (the creative process effect on commercial contents) [7]
I have to write a 2500 word essay on 'Ways in which the creative process is affected by commercial contexts' giving specific examples. I am focusing on films and how scenes or endings are changed because of public demand/reactions (example Australia: changed to happy ending where Hugh Jackman lives). I am going to compare it with I am Legend where the ending is changed to where the main character dies, but for same reason as Australia - to get better reviews and to make more money. I will also mention some other films where similar things happened, but have to relate it to Tastes and Values.
I found a good quote - "The idea of taste cannot now be separated from the idea of the consumer" from Raymond Williams that I want to use, but always get stuck on the Introductory Paragraph. Especially the first sentence. Can anyone give me some ideas for a first sentence?
I have to write a 2500 word essay on 'Ways in which the creative process is affected by commercial contexts' giving specific examples. I am focusing on films and how scenes or endings are changed because of public demand/reactions (example Australia: changed to happy ending where Hugh Jackman lives). I am going to compare it with I am Legend where the ending is changed to where the main character dies, but for same reason as Australia - to get better reviews and to make more money. I will also mention some other films where similar things happened, but have to relate it to Tastes and Values.
I found a good quote - "The idea of taste cannot now be separated from the idea of the consumer" from Raymond Williams that I want to use, but always get stuck on the Introductory Paragraph. Especially the first sentence. Can anyone give me some ideas for a first sentence?
