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Name: Sreeja
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sree_raj   
Dec 19, 2013
Writing Feedback / ART SHOULD NOT BE FUNDED BY THE GOVERNMENT; AGREE/ DISAGREE? [4]

Some people believe that arts like music and painting should not be funded by the government . others believe that these are important for a society and need government funding.

Do you agree or disagree?

There is currently a contentious argument over whether the fine arts like music and painting be bestowed with the funds from the government authorities. I somewhat agree with the opinion that arts demand resources because of their effects on intercontinental cultural exchange as well as health; however there are many sensitive issues such as basic needs and education which require a large chunk of that.

The main reason why I believe arts should be funded is owing to the fact that it allows cross-cultural communication which in turn boosts up the economy. Indeed there has been an influx of enthusiasts from all over the world who wish to learn and spread Indian culture. For instance, icons in Carnatic music and painting namely M S Subbalaxmi, Shri Ravishankar and M F Hussain have always been sought after. Undoubtedly, this leads to a positive surge in the country's economy.

In addition, effects of music and painting on health have been enormous. For example, music therapy has been widely practised in the field of medicine as a modality of cure and palliation. Moreover, painting plays a major role in the elation of mood in psychiatric health. Hence a flow of funds should be mandated from the ruling body.

However, crucial issues such as basic needs and education be dealt with by diverting more into these sections. Even in the current world, many are still deprived of these minimum requirements. For instance, it was quoted recently that more than sixty percent surviving below the poverty line. This is an irony that people place arts over the necessities.

In conclusion, I partly agree that the money should be spent on arts like music and painting. This is because of the positive effects on culture and health. However, I admit that the issues like basic needs and education be better addressed. Given this situation, it seems that the funds from the government be spent wisely catering to everyone's needs.
sree_raj   
Dec 4, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS (Academic)Task 2- Responsibility to pay for the cost of road development [16]

Hi JethroJosh,

Thanks a bunch. I guess i need to polish myself in building up a paragraph with coherence and progressing it with good vocab.
I will follow dominic coles n simon's tips on writing as well as your suggestions. Would you mind providing me with the secrets of IELTS pdf?

How do i send in my mail id?

Cheers,
sree_raj   
Dec 3, 2013
Writing Feedback / IELTS (Academic)Task 2- Responsibility to pay for the cost of road development [16]

[quote=JethroJosh]You may try Mr Michael wattie (Mikkie wattie). He is a current examiner from Adelaide, Australia. He charges $7 for essays, which is the cheapest one you can get. Google his name and you can't miss it.

1, work on your paragraphs than essays.
2, read DC coles and SIMON IELTS ( ex-examiners)--> google
3, avoid word combination errors ( though you have individual vocabularies, you need ' phrases or chunks' to impress the examiner
4, If your band score is 7 band, then do not learn more vocabs but avoid errors. If it is 8 band, then you need to learn more phrases or collocations of those academic words

5, sharpen your modal verbs and imperative voice skills
6,Try to communicate with the examiner rather than showing- off
7, send me your email ID and I will send you the secrets of IELTS PDF
8, research and study the band criteria, which can be downloaded from google.

Hi JethroJosh,

I am new to this blog and this is like a piece of valuable information any can't afford to miss. I will be giving IELTS for the 2nd time with my first scoring L- 8,R- 7.5,S- 7.5,W- 6.5. Being a doc for migration, it's mandatory for me to have 7 in all the sections. So disappointed with my first, am on a look out for guidance in writing and you have been just amazing.

Thanks for the tips,
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