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Name: Fatima Alawami
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Fofo123   
Dec 9, 2013
Writing Feedback / Homework helps teachers to assess students' understanding ; Advantages of homework [6]

First body paragraph - opinion essay - Advantage Of Homework

Hello guys, I need your help to fix this paragraph in (vocabulary, grammar and sentence structure). Also, the teacher asked me to put conjunctions (FANBOY - for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).

To begin with, homework helps students to control their time management even if they are stressed; also it teaches them how to complete their tasks in a scheduled time. Students can learn how to complete their schedule tasks in a right way. For example, after the students come back home they have nothing required to do, so they would play games instead of studying, but if they have an assignment, means they have to study more. Also, it makes students using schedules for other activities like planning for the next weekend. Moreover, feeling stressed can make students set priorities to manage their time. For example, students delay their activities in order to do their homework because it is important to pass their class. Furthermore, homework is preparing students to big assignment in university which is more stressful. Overall, homework teaches students how to deal with their time starting with the most important things.
Fofo123   
Dec 8, 2013
Writing Feedback / Homework helps teachers to assess students' understanding ; Advantages of homework [6]

Finally, homework helps teachers to assess students' understanding and give the teacher the opportunity to discover students' skills. Teachers cannot assess students truthfully by just giving them tests. Students are quite nervous when they do test, so it is not the best way to assess their understanding. Also, they have more pressure than usual in final written tests which is not measure for their understanding. Moreover, teachers can assess in which parts students are good at. For example, some students might be good at math more than other materials, so homework shows their skills. Also, it helps to make a decision of their major in future.
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