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Last Post: Nov 19, 2009
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Nov 19, 2009
Undergraduate / Essay prompt 2# What is your intended major? [9]

I thought this was pretty descent, but go deeper and think about the qualities of yourself that leads you to believe you were born to do this. Don't focus too much of scene but use it as a start to transition to who you to be a filmmaker.
iamcentrum   
May 30, 2009
Essays / 5 paragraph essay on writing about my study skills and work ethics [3]

I'm trying to get a teacher recommendation and he said to write a 5 paragraph essay on my study skills and work ethics. But what should I include regarding writing about my study skills and my work ethics into a 5 pararagaph essay. What stuff should I be talking about? What should I include regarding this subject.
iamcentrum   
May 2, 2009
Essays / In general, how to write a term paper? [15]

I would first outline it. Outline the points you need. I usually start out with body paragraphs and then finish it up with intro and conclusion
iamcentrum   
May 2, 2009
Research Papers / Essay on No drinking on the beach in San Diego [11]

Ok well I am writing a research paper on why there SHOULD NOT BE a DRINKING ON THE beach ban in San Diego. I need some major help with this. I need ideas on what key words I should be searching for regarding the beach ban in san diego.

Here are some reasons

It jepordises people's freedom
help me figure out why it jepordizes people freedom good strong reasons.
Makes business close down
Less Tourism-which could affect business
Any other reasons you can think of will be a big help.

Can someone help me expand these ideas, I'm having hard time doing this.

I already wrote some of its still very drafty so here i usually start from body paragraphs

Due to the beach ban there have many complaints from many business owners. These criticisms from these owners involves there business running low. For example the owner of the beach Guava bar, Eric Christianse reports that his business was going down ever since the ban has been put to effect. Madeleine Binnie, a boutique owner, was also affected by the beach ban negatively in terms of the sales of her business. Being with this business for seven years, she will eventually have to close her shop for good due to the fewer customers coming into her store. Binnie comments, ""If they can't do anything at the beach, they're not going to come."

Many people claim that in order for a place to family friendly the place has to be alcohol free. Most of the people who have an alcohol beverage are responsible adults who have families. These adults are the cause of the adult beverage industry to be a multibillion-dollar industry; not the underage drinkers who most likely steal the alcohol from their friends as well as the party going young adults. There are several ways to reduce the drinking problem other than by having the ban.

With the beach ban on effect, freedom has been slowly been a rising issue as it has, during these past few years. It is also very unfortunate that the freedom to drink has been taken away from those have been drinking responsible. Not all alcohol drinkers of the beach are all the typical young adult party goes, but some are actual trustworthy civilians who drink responsibly on the nice cool beach to have enjoyable time. The beach was a great place where people would come to the beach and have enjoyable cocktail for a simple casual satisfaction. According to the political constultant, Bob Glaser, "This is why we live in a beach area like San Diego... We enjoy the beach and sometimes a cocktail." It is also absurd that people are allowed to get drink at bars and come to the beach drunk. Each year more and more rules are being added to remove the freedom of simple pleasure of the beach. These includes the simple pleasures of smoking on the beach or even the rules of not allowing a nice leisure walk with your dog.

One of the many reasons the beach ban comes into effect is to do make the beach a safer, and more family friendly while excluding others to go to the beach for their own personal enjoyment.
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