klokand
Dec 21, 2013
Grammar, Usage / Grammatical errors in this sentence [15]
"Students should be entitled with the freedom of choice..." - recognize this sentence.
Hi, there, I am bit struggle about my topic sentence, I want to express that student should decide whether study global news or not, and I want it sounds formal and powerful.
This is my work.
"Students should be entitled with the freedom of choice for determining whether or not studying global news."
So please help me.
"Students should be entitled with the freedom of choice..." - recognize this sentence.
Hi, there, I am bit struggle about my topic sentence, I want to express that student should decide whether study global news or not, and I want it sounds formal and powerful.
This is my work.
"Students should be entitled with the freedom of choice for determining whether or not studying global news."
So please help me.