Undergraduate / '...brilliance, wit, and passion for the world. Just like me' YALE SUPPLEMENTS [6]

awww i like ur LGBT essay! all ur responses r in good shape. good luck for all ur applic :D

Undergraduate / burning congee - YALE SUP ESSAY [5]

thank u so much>.< all the best!

Undergraduate / COMMON APP ESSAY - MEDICINE, DEATH, ART, SURGERY [5]

i agree with garmin that u can make the opening more attention-grabbing. maybe less telling. other than that, a great one

Undergraduate / 'has many quirky yet attractive qualities' Yale's Supplements; SHORT QUESTIONS AND ANSWERS [2]

the perspectives of ur essay is fresh, and i think it shows ur growth and identity. Good luck for ur application!

Undergraduate / "I thought I was the only one!"- Harvard [6]

sorry i thought it is sup essay...ya for activity,only 150 words