Writing Feedback / İELTS ESSAY- TASK 1 -MAP- AN İSLAND AFTER AND BEFORE CONSTRUCTİON [6]

These two maps show the development of an Island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
First of all, from the given meters we can say that it is approximately 200 meters from the east to the west of the Island. It is clear that there are big differences between two maps.

In the first view of the Island there are only a few trees in the east and west of the Island before the construction, but from the second map it can be seen that this Island was improved and built new touristic places and houses among those trees.

The pier was made south of the Island for sailing and connected to the reception that is located in the center of the Island by the vehicle track. The reception was surrounded by the vehicle track which links reception to restaurant that is situated in the north of the map.

As this is the Island there are a lot of footpaths. In the East and west of the reception there are accommodations, and Buildings locating west of the map are joined to the reception by the paths. People can also use pathways to go beach in the west of the Is

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