Posts by sunny0122

sunny0122

Jan 10, 2014

Undergraduate / I will do everything I can to fully maximize my university experience; Queens PS [4]

Instead of Saying "I will take classes to help me fulfill my dream.." I think that you should mention specific classes or programs that Queens that interest you, this will show them that you did some extra research on their school. You did a really good job with using specific clubs you are interested in!! But I think you should beef up your conclusion a little bit more, maybe include how you will contribute to their school, and you didn't really talk about the "and beyond" part so you could include that in your conclusion? I hope that helped! Good luck on your application process!!

sunny0122

Jan 9, 2014

Undergraduate / 'As a student of Corning East High School' Georgia Tech Essay - Contribution to community [3]

Thank you so much!! And yeah I wanted to talk about their research programs and dance teams too, but I wasn't sure if it was too specific, so I will fix that for sure! and Its due tomorrow so You aren't too late! Again thanks a ton!

sunny0122

Jan 9, 2014

Undergraduate / 'As a student of Corning East High School' Georgia Tech Essay - Contribution to community [3]

TOPIC: Why are you interested in attending Georgia Tech and what do you hope to contribute to our community? (150 word limit)

This is what I have so far, and I'm kind of stuck and don't know where to go from here please please help!! And Its due by tomorrow night soo I'm stressed!! I need help on how I will contribute to the community, so please help!!

As a student of Corning East High School, I have had the opportunity of participating in the International Baccalaureate Program. This program helped me with critical thinking skills and a diversified out look, despite the advantage it has given me, it has set up a good challenge for me to find a college that will match the diversity and intellect I encountered at my high school.

Georgia tech is one of the most important research universities in the world. I will receive and learn from the best professors. The research opportunities offered at GT interest me the most. GT will help me advance in my major of Biomedical Engineering and provide me with the strongest academics programs, all taught by the highly educated professors.