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Jan 22, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 1 : The challenges people face when they go to live in other countries [5]
As it is an IELTS task1 essay, I suggest to add at least one sentence describing the data for age group 35 to 54 in the second paragraph.
As it is an IELTS task1 essay, I suggest to add at least one sentence describing the data for age group 35 to 54 in the second paragraph.
